Jayfeather's Bravery: part 2

BEWARE! THE FOLLOWING INCLUDES SPOILERS FOR OMEN OF THE STARS
<sub>Fading Echoes

page 223</sub>

'Shock rang through him as he hit a tree. It sent him reeling, chest first into a puddle. Twisting, he saw a figure looming over him, a broad face leering down at him through the mist.

"NO!" His voice cracked into a whimper.
"It's Yellowfang, you mousebrain!" The she-cat grabbed him by the scruff and hauled him to his paws...'

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I really do love this part! its so so funny! And im serious! It was like 5 minutes later!!!
I feel so bad for Leafpool. Okay, know how Leafpool sometimes watches her kits with sad eyes from a distance? Well the real reason she does that is because she cant believe she gave birth to idiots. Jayfeather, falls in love with a stick. Like comon!! and remember when tigerstar tried to teach hollyleaf his evil ways? wanna know why she rejected him? because she already was evil! comon! she wanted to be a leader as well and murder was in her blood!!! and lionblaze...well....he is a hooker. heatherpaw....heatherpaw.....heatherpaw....heatherpaw....CINDERHEART! <3

anyway,this is the second part of my entry for 's contests. hope you liked it!

part 1:[link]